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Week of 6/19
My employees were working on a construction site and  and these kid s had horrible candy that they were dropping on the street. I went to one of them up and were the size of tennis balls and one exploded in my hand . they were disgusting and know it was all over my hand . They next day we went to the school and talked to the kids and they said  we  are not going to throw them again. And the next day there was no candies thrown and  are construction site was clean as a whistle and no exploding candies .

Week of 6/12


 

Dear Andrew
I am wondering  have you ever delivered a baby at  a home ?. And  do you work with doctors beyond borders which is a organization when doctors from different countries go around the world and help people in need ? I know when i grow up I want to become a doctor that works on human brains . I would also like to know when you go to people's homes to help do you usually end up going to the hospital.And if so do you go with them and help the doctors at the hospital with the patients  .
Sincerely Maria
Week of 6/5

I was on my way to work at the hospital. As I was walking  to the hospital I saw this big gush of water in front of the er . I had know idea what was happening .   As soon as I got into the hospital I saw a pipe leaking in the er and the water just kept gushing out . The water sprayed all over me .  finally someone came and fixed the pipe . then i went outside to eat my lunch and as soon as I get outside it started raining and I was wet all over again . I was wet.

Week of 5/30
One day I came home from school and it was pouring rain. I was so unhappy   my pool was getting set up is and it was  Pouring rain .I told my mom I would go to the store and pick up some groceries for this week she said okay honey be careful it's raining really hard out. Walking to the store and it was It was such hard lightning I couldn't believe it. In the lightning I saw Ocean and how the water from the sky is coming down on us.  I could see Everything in the sky. Like fish .
Week of 5/24
It was my birthday And I told my mom that I wanted to go to my favorite burger joint . We took the car to the place and I ordered My burger. I got my burger and went to the bench to eat it.  As soon as I sat down to eat these hand came behind me and took my burger. I Turned around and It was my friend and she said that was actually hers . I knew why I had her burger My name is brenia . But people call me bree and I ordered under  the name bree. Bye bye .

Week of 5/8
 I was not a good cook at all . My mom was my grandma was but I am not. My mom and dad where going to dinner for my dad’s job.  That meant I had to make dinner . I took out the ingredients to make tacos .  I started making them Once  I was done I put them all together . I started making them I could not stop eating them It was so good.. My sister and brother both thought it was delicious . as soon as my mom and dad got home they tride it and they said it was so good.
Week of 4/30


I was walking threw the city one day and I saw fog coming out of the ally . I went into the alley and saw slime dripping thru  the new york city sewer pipe  . I touched the slime it smelled like flower but did not look like them Then I saw the pipe rattle and more slime came out and landed all over me .  The next day I called the investigator to come look at it he said he had to take it to the crime lab . It came back and they said it was ok.
Week of 4/2

I was going to sleep . And I decided to make myself some tea . I  drank my tea and then I went to sleep. The next day I looked in the mirror and I could not see myself . As I went to walk out the door I realized I could walk threw It. I went down to the train station and tried to ask someone for help no one could see me . Then I went to the doctors and said drink this . Then I went back to normal . The doctor said the tea was recalled because It was  a invisible  potion.

Weekof 3/20

One night I  was in the medical lab. Working on a clinical trial  for my boss when I heard a jingle I walked over to the other lab table. And It looked like a tiny rubix cube. I touched the top  it opened.

I was shocked  how can something so tiny change everything . As I looked at the picture popped up and It was all these secret files on the brain and medical things. The next day I took it to my boss and she said we could use this information to make science history . Then we found a cure .


Week of 3/13

It was picture day and I was the first one in line I was so happy . I was going to be the first on in the yearbook this year . Today was going to be the day I got to be the first picture in the the yearbook . The next day came and it was time to deliver yearbooks . The next day I got my yearbook I rushed to my class page and I was last I was so sad. I told my friend she said it goes by name that is why I am always last. Now I understand .bye .
Week of 3/6

  Beth was walking with her friend Jimmy  threw the  park  As we were walking we saw this statute being built. Beth went up to the person and said excuse me  what are you building Beth asked . I am building a hand for that beautiful tree . The next day Beth went back to the park . The man was not there . Paint was  all over the ground the fingers were covered with red paint . So I went to the police as I walked back to the park I was surprised to see that the man was there and he was shooting a movie.
Week of 2/27


As I was walking home from school . I saw a sigh . However it had a remarkable piece of art on it.  It had yellow colors.  I looked down at the bottom and saw that it said davinci Picked it up and ran to the museum. I went to the front desk and said hello my name is lisa  and   discovered this piece of painting . YOU found the da vinci. You are the  museums hero.  Are museum lost the painting . WE were going to shut down if  someone did not turn it in . On saturday I got the key to the city for finding the long lost painting   .
Week of 2/12

It was Halloween night. I was trick or treating . I went up to this house and rang  the doorbell .

I opened the door and suddenly the lights went out . I  was so scared. There was a green glow from the basement.  I stepped on one stair.   It creaked . As I walked down more I felt the green fog wrapped around my leg . It felt slimy I did not know what to do . As I looked down it was an octopus . I started running . I ran out of the house .   I woke up . It was all just a dream. bye.


Week of 2/6

Me and my team wher trying to research the beloved island of moki

. As we walked threw the islands  woods we heard this horrible screech The noise was so loud we ran over as quick as we could  but the animal was gone . A new discovery . The next day  we tried  to find it but we could not then that night We heard the  horrible  sound again . We rn so fast and we found it as I looked closer I could see  than even close ad I said bree . it was my dog and we went back to the camper .

Week of 1/29

 As  Mary and Maya walked threw the wood .  Boats  were right in front of them  . It was a old ship yard as they walked thru they found this old crew  ship  It had my last name on it I said to maya  it was huge .  We walked out of the old ship yard . And we went to go talk to my mom . Mom said it was our  family's ship from a long time ago .  Dad said that night we were going to clean up our old ship and said we where going to have ur own crusie line.

Week of 1/22

One day the smith bunny family was trying to decorate there house for spring but as they woke with a shutter . They could  here thing being moved around in there house someone was trying to steal their carrots  . Papa went in and the thief was gone tearfully the baby rabbits credit  the next night the smiths were sleeping and they felt someone moving under their bed  it was the baby bunny eating carrots in his mauve shirt . that where all are carrot went . As papa and baby bunny smiled . So they ate  more carrot and lived happy ever after forever.

Week of 1/15


  I was on the farm and it was a sunny day. The sky grew dark and i knew it was a twister oh no . me and my family new it would be here in 15 minutes so we went to are room and packed are most prize possession. My mom said we had to go e got all the animals to the underground cellar and Are dogs with us . It was over as we came out of the cellar everything was gone . Then the county gave us money to build the farm I was so happy . Are animals where happy to .

Week of 1/8

I was walking with my mom on a hiking trail and I went to the side and my mom went the left I did not know where my mom went . I looked in front and behind . Which way . I was looking everywhere what to do as I was looking for my mom i found a dog . She had a note on her collar It read . If you find this dog please give it a home .I started walking down the mountain .Mom was at the bottom she . H mom I found this dog can we keep her  of course.

Week of 11/11

In 2017 I hope that ...



Train my dog.

Learn how to ski.

To help people.

To spend time with my family.  

To be healthy.

To ride my bike.

To swim.

To work harder .

To write.

To read .

Do more.

To learn.

Go to school.

To shop.

To celebrate.

To be happy.

To be sad.

To be mad .

To be smart .
To sing .
To play.
To make music .
To play my clarinet.
To watch.
To listen.
To be patient.
To give more.
To do more.
To help more.
These are my hopes for 2017 what are your’s . And happy new year.

Week of 12/05

I was working in my lab and I was working with solids  liquids and gases .   I was finishing up my last lab   befor I left I dropped my last liquid poof it was done. I went behind my desk to get my bag and my coat  as I trend around it changed shape it was a monster it went into the city I made a antidote to stop it  . I got to it and shot it .  I took the beaker and locked it in   the beaker . I took it  back to the lab and put it in the danger zone .   
Week of 11/27

Me and  my class we're going to the zoo  we we want to go see the crocodiles  the cage was wide  the bars where orange .  within the cage  .   we went to go see the lions in their cages I could feel the cage  and I remembered I was afraid of lions   I could feel its breath  I was so scared   .

They were picking who would go in the cage and feed it

The teacher called on me  . So I  went in and feed the lion  I  was so scared  that day i got over my fear of lions . The end .


Week of 11/20

  I was walking threw the cafe and I saw this sign  that sad sculpting challenge.   The Winner gets to keep their sculpting in the cafe .  The day finally came and   there where more people than I had expected  I was almost done  three minutes sculptures the man said I could feel the sweat rolling down my face .  It’s done   the judge came around  the inside of me was jumping the outside  was still as  a stone .  I could watch the movement of the judge'S hand give me the ribbon .  and the winner is valerie I  was jumping .   here's a pic

Week of 11/13

   Greetings humans of earth  I am  ohbot peaky . let’s go back 2 hours me and my uncle bob and my siblings and cousins camping in the RV.  We were all   playing  football outside  and my uncle was starting a fire  .  We were all  eating and this ship came down and this thing came out .  Greeting humans of earth  I am obot peaky and I want you to help me spread the word on making peace.  So later that summer we held teleconferences to spread world peace all over the word .   

Week of 11/7
 I was at home that Day . The year was 1965 and I was heading down for my breakfast . My mom and grandma   were sitting on the couch . There were people walking on the streets of washington dc on the t.v. . What are they doing? I said    Marching my mom said . Where are they going? I said . To   lincoln memorial to go see martin luther king jr. say a speech . come sit said my grandma . wow .    and that day martin luther king jr gave  his speech .


Week of 10/31

 I was walking home from school that day . There was a fire in the city  our family's restaurant burned down  . The next day people were  donating models and and stoves rebuilding the dinner it took along time .  before it was ready but when it was finished it was amazing .   After words  I was so glad it was back to its former glory . And everyone who helped get a free meal at the new diner  .


Week of 10/25

It was my birthday  however I felt yellow  which means sick .  It was remarkable how you could be sick on your birthday .  we went to the doctors and they discovered I  had a virus. My mom gave me all my present in bed  .   And made  gingerly cookies  .    


Week of 10/17

Ally was in school one day  . And her teacher was talking about future technology.  He had a picture that looked like a big flying spider  .  Mr. smith  said they are going to be called drones .

Well Mr.Smith said the are going  to  be used for delivering packages .  Ally looked out the window  .  And saw drones flying every where  we did not now what to do .  the school was on lockdown  .  Ally Ally   can you please tell me  what 2x2 is .oh ok it is 4  frew it was all just a dream . Mr Smith asks  what are drones . Nooooooooo.

Week of 10/10

Sally  walked into her closet and she saw a basket of clothing  .  And the  material  of her clothes felt   wet and  dropie .   Sally  new her sister did not put the in the dryer . Sally  walked down to the basement and she saw suds coming out of the machine.  She turns to the left and she sees her sister  covered  in  suds  . She takes out all the clothes from the dryer .

 Her  older sister  opened the washing machine to early .   And that why there clothes were wet  and later that day she  taught her sister  to use the washing machine.  Right .

 
 Week of 10/03
Kelly was walking down the  street and she saw  her favorite shop was closing down . The owner put the key in the loke and closed the store for good . And the click of the door was earth shattering . kelly ran over to mr. smith and said why are you closing the store we cannot sell anything
 Kelly thought in bed that night how can i save the store.  The next day she  brought in the big boxes of close and she was able to make enough money to buy the store bake and the mr. smith sell  his things in.


9/26
Today   we are  going to the zoo to look at the giraffes . We got in the line to get on the bus . Mrs.gagnon the teacher  on  to the  buses than she pointed to the pink sheet of rules .  we got to the zoo and went right to the giraffes. We  got there and the guy was just drilling  the last bolt in do the giraffes.   We got out are notebooks  and took notes on  the giraffes .  we got back on the bus and started to draw giraffes.

 We got back to the classroom  . And started quietly writing a story.  

37 comments:

  1. Hi Maria,
    Good job using all of the challenge words this week.
    I look forward to reading more of your writing.
    Mrs. Wlazlo :)

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  2. Maria, I really like your story´s but my most favorite would have to be the one about the store closing down. Because you used a lot of good things and that was on how you started off bad and then at the end it became good
    Alyssa,USA

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  3. Well done Maria.
    Reading your story initially it made me think of the owls in Hogworths delivering the post. I don't think I'd like to see that many drones flyong around the place.
    Keep up the good work.
    Mrs Boyce
    Ireland.

    https://mrsboycesclass.100wc.net/

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  4. Hi Maria,
    Congrats on the showcase!I loved the twist on the ending.One thing I would work on is transitions.
    Clara Myers

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  5. Maria really nice Job on getting showcased it was a really good story and really nice ending and begging
    Alyssa USA

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  6. Hi Maria! I like in this weeks 100wc that you made it realistic and that it is like you have had the experience.

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  7. Love your showcased piece I understand why it got showcased

    FROM OLIVIA across the room

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  8. An excellent use of history in your piece. That has American significance, but we know about it in the UK too. Remember capital letters for proper nouns.

    Mr. M (From across the pond - further away from 'across the room' :-))

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  9. hi maria I really like your peice because it gave me differnt things like how it had history and writing
    From Alyssa your elbow partner

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  10. It would be a wonderful world indeed if teleconferences were used to bring about world peace.

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  11. Hi Maria,
    Love your Ohbot's message.Hope everyone listens!
    Mrs. Wlazlo next door :)

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  12. HI Miria,
    I like the words you used like trended.

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  14. Dear Maria, My name is Ryan from Guilderland Elementary School.
    I like how you named the things you will do in 2017 in a certain order.
    I think your pieces will be even better with less listing!
    Nice job!!!!! :) Here is my blog: http://wlazloswonders.blogspot.com/p/ryans-page.html


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  15. HI my name is Declan
    Where from usa or the class next to you
    I love that you list the thing you want to do and I like that you are pushing yourself to do all of these thing
    But I think you should of put some Sentences in there
    I THINK THAT YOUR WRITING IS EPIC

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  16. Hi Maria!!! It’s Raney.
    I loved your 2017 resolutions. They were wonderful. I loved the way how you put your story in a list. It makes it way easier to read. I loved your resolution saying to play the Clarinet!
    One thing that you should think about is using more description, tell people why you want this New Year's resolution to happen. But other than that, it was wonderful!! I loved your piece.

    If you want to see my story’s, here’s the link!
    http://wlazloswonders.blogspot.com/p/raneys-page.html
    Sincerely, Raney

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  17. I love your peace and I have a lot of targets that I am engaging on like you and I love it because it’s like a poem but I think that you should tell why you chose those objectives good job -Akeem

    resolutions peace

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  18. Hi Maria my name is Connor I really liked your piece my favorite part was when you said you wanted to train your dog I hope you have fun doing that anyhow I think that maybe probably not but maybe add a bit more at the end. Keep up the great work !!!

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  19. hi im nick from the room next door 5w,i think your piece is great i like how it's like poetry you should add commas instead of periods but other that that it is a great piece!!!

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  20. hi I am Miles from Guilderland Elementary.
    I like how many hopes you have.but every sentence starts with to And it's a lot to swallow.Great job! (I'm commenting on I hope that .)

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  21. hi I am Miles from Guilderland Elementary.
    I like how many hopes you have.but every sentence starts with to And it's a lot to swallow.Great job! (I'm commenting on I hope that .)

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  22. Dear
    Maria ,

    Hello Maria ,it Anya in Mrs.wlazlo’s class next door . I loved your piece it was written greatly . One thing that could make even better is maybe some so sentences it would make it even cooler . Love the piece keep working hard , You go girl !

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  23. Dear
    Maria ,

    Hello Maria ,it Anya in Mrs.wlazlo’s class next door . I loved your piece it was written greatly . One thing that could make even better is maybe some so sentences it would make it even cooler . Love the piece keep working hard , You go girl !Dear
    Maria ,

    Hello Maria ,it Anya in Mrs.wlazlo’s class next door . I loved your piece it was written greatly . One thing that could make even better is maybe some so sentences it would make it even cooler . Love the piece keep working hard , You go girl !

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  24. Hi, Maria my name is $!\/@ ( or Siva or the BEST COMMENTOR ON THIS SIDE OF THIS HERE COUNTRY or just Siva). I really like your writing piece. I’m blown away many things you want to get better at. I also, liked how it kind of sounds like a poem. It is really cool when you make the first word of most of your sentences is To.
    Sincerely, $!\/@
    Click on Hi, Maria my name is $!\/@ ( or Siva or the BEST COMMENTOR ON THIS SIDE OF THIS HERE COUNTRY or just Siva). I really like your writing piece. I’m blown away many things you want to get better at. I also, liked how it kind of sounds like a poem. It is really cool when you make the first word of most of your sentences is To.
    Sincerely, $!\/@

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  25. Hi Maria, my name is Noah (or Batman, Ace, Lord of awesome, or totally average next door neighbor) I like how you included all the things you want to do. But I think that you could have described some stuff about what you’re doing. But overall your story made me think about stuff I could do in 2017. Noah (or Batman, Ace, Lord of awesome, or totally average next door neighbor) Blog

    Sincerely, (from guilderland,NY)
    Noah (or Batman, Ace, Lord of awesome, or totally average next door neighbor)

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  26. Hi Maria!
    My name is Clara from Mrs.Wlazlo class next door (Guilderland NY).
    I liked how you included personal things in your list.
    If I were you I would try to narrow down the list and explain more (why you want to do that)
    Make sure you checkout my blog page http://wlazloswonders.blogspot.com/p/claras-page.html
    keep up the good work!
    From Clara M.

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  27. Hi,I'm Kate from Mrs.Wlazlo's class Guilderland, NY
    I Love the way you use your required words.
    I think you could improve by making them more exciting!
    Keep up the great work!
    -Kate

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  28. Great job
    I think some dialogue would look goog in your stories,I love the list and how you organized them all.
    From Olivia

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  29. Hi Maria!
    I love your in 2017 I hope. . .story, and what I liked most about it is that you shared a lot of your goals. Maybe someone will read it and take it as a role model, and that will make their and your goals almost the same. I love your work!!
    Angie

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  30. For your 12/11 piece -
    Hi Maria! Great job! You described EVERYTHING you hoped for in 2017 in just 100 words! Something that you glowed in was description. Maybe next time - to make your piece even better - you could add some feeling - how would it make you feel to get all that stuff done? Otherwise, AMAZING job!!!
    Ava, USA

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  31. I like your story. I am sure I would be surprised to find a rabbit under my bed, eating carrots and wearing a shirt.
    Mrs. Hojnacki
    Blissfield, USA

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  32. For your 3/20 piece -
    Hi Maria! Great job! You used action words, and described the files in your piece! Something that you glowed in was description. Maybe next time - to make your piece even better - you could add some feeling -how did the tiny rubix cube make you feel? Otherwise, GREAT job!
    Ava, USA

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  33. Hi Maria,
    I love your creative take on this week's prompt. I could use some of that tea!
    Great work!

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  34. Hi maria, I love your piece about turning invisible! I think you can work on squeezing in some quotation marks to let the reader know when you are talking but other than that it was amazing!

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  35. good job I like your week 11/7 piece

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  36. Week of 6/5
    Hi Maria, is it still raining there?! Our rainy season seems to be taking a break at the moment but that just means a tremendous storm will build up. Hope you stay dry in future...

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